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VxPoem ID: 38073
Category:
mother_earth
Posted: April 8th. 2010 4:20:02 PM
Views: 492 |
Seduction (Rewrite)
by Loner91
Age Group: Adult
Long anticipated fingers
twirl my hair, caress my body.
An embrace amid, welcomed,
desired, fervent kisses elicit
cold shivers to radiate blissfully.
Her cool taste, fresh scent
and gentle touch tantalize.
Oceanic eyes ensnare my gaze;
porcelain skin and luscious hair
enthrall my soul.
Fluid and graceful ancestral
dance, cascade passionate wave
surging over restraint.
Love crests not in her presence.
Her willing prisoner of love.
Moistened curls cling
dreading her departure.
Soft sighs rush my ear.
Air crackles and reverberates,
ebbing my passion.
Resting in my arms,
a sunbeam flows
upon her face revealing
an intoxicating smile then,
she recedes to her home.
Tension dissolves into
peace, forgotten in love.
Clear sky filters down
through translucent green
hands, delivering tranquility.
Joyous ecstasy floods
my veins no longer.
Deep within wells
a longing for her touch.
My soul yearns.
Author's Notes: Read the original and this one and tell me which one is better. Or if this one could use any improvements. Hoping to finish this one and make it grand.
Author's Location: Bowling Green, Kentucky
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