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VxPoem ID: 12515
Posted: May 12th. 2005 1:18:54 PM
Oh, yes, I remember: A Poem of Love
Age Group: Adult
If I said that Sweetness was sweet
I would have told you half a story
If I claimed that C was mysterious
The enigma would remain
If I would tell you of the enchantment
That Irish cast me in
You still would be left out of it all...
Where each of them represented a part I sought
Somehow the trinity formed a whole
And between each side in this separation I was torn
Left or right - move, stay?
Write or speak, tomorrow... or today...?
And then came A.
Oh, yes, he made me forget the mysteries of C
Because no jaw line could surpass A's
What C's eyes were in comparison is nothing
For A's holds things I have no words for
Where Sweetness was sweet
A is sweeter
A complement here, and a love for similar things
Oh yes, that was sweet of him...
Where Irish was dazzeling, so A must be blinding
For I have looked upon him every day...
And the days go on, yet still he's gone...
A broke the spell...
I wait... I wait....
He lives so far away...
Author's Notes: Dammit.
*gyilkos pillantás* yes, specific... damn, this isn't a poem, it's my thoughts spelled out in an odd code language of hinting, that's what it is!
So yeah. You can deduce what it's about. You can probably also deduce that where I wrote A and C, there are names there. The other two - well, I have names fashioned for them.
Ok, so C has a code name too, but if I used it, it would force me to put it under humor rather than personal life.
And this is just about the most lopsided thing I've ever come up with as an excuse for a poem, good grief.
You can also deduce that I'm very angry at the moment, and I don't know why. *withers* I've gone mad... crazy, since yesterday. That was my LIMIT of my life's patience!
And yes, A lives far away, and he can't communicate for a couple of days. I'm *dying* here.
I just wanted to say it here. Maybe soon I can crank out a decent poem and delete this one... or do something to it, I don't know!
It sounds so stupid with this A C nonsense - I need new names for 'em.
Oh, world, I can't concentrate on anything else... the place where we met is already probably irked at me - you can so feel it on everything I do there that I'm just getting edgy in the waiting.
SOMEBODY if you have an aswer... I'm about to die... so speak up quickly!
Dammit, why am I angry!
Author's Location: Szeged, Hungary
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