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VxPoem ID: 17252

Category: personal_life

Posted: October 21st. 2005 3:54:45 PM

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The Raven

by Sonthiel
 Age Group: Adult

She flies across a pitch black sky You only see the silent sheen Left by moon on twisted feathers Warped and broken by the gaze Of peacocks and of beauties bright Shun the creature of the night
Her beloved lies in far off place where she can never see her See her for the lie she is Denial has cracked her heart Unrequited love was like a shot upon its crystal It should sparkle as it falls but it doesn't catch the light Melting in the darkness That living block of ice
She looks upon the world with eyes that none can ever see Eyes behind the twisted face A man upon reflection Gazes back into those eyes Or is that just a dream Who is that twisted raven? Who were they meant to be?
What you missed when I looked in those eyes was that
I saw
...me.
 Author's Notes: At long last I've decided to edit this poem to reflect the truth as I know it and have known it. The word 'he' in the first line of the second stanza has been changed to 'she'. I'm not sure if it reads better though.

Author's Location: Enfield, England More Poems: Sonthiel has posted 24 additional poems- View them? Author's Profile: To learn more about Sonthiel - Click HERE
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